My colour vision isnt great but what about some more refreshing zingy fruity juicy colours, unless of course the gold/pale yellow and pink will be spot varnished or foiled.
How much have you played around with the shape of the bottles? Could you alter the form a little more to give it that extra value and tactile appreciation.
The collar label beats the main logo incorporation variation.
The right hand bottle variations would perhaps benefit from the scale of the label shrunk by as much as 40/50/60% percent for refinement and it will make the positioning much easier for you.
Whats on the back and how will it interact with the front, or not?
Take the left variation forward and perhaps play with the shape of the black box and non centred type within?
There is something not quite right about the positioning of the '7% vol.' etc. You could try extend the black box to the bottom of the bottle and place the type within it at the bottom. then you will have two rounded corner sections and not 4 if you see what I mean.
Lowercase 'gold' & 'blush'?
a combination of matt/suede finish with a glimmer of UV varnish to catch the lights on the logo and flavour type.
What about offsetting the information differently?
All in all I love what your doing with these designs and I hope this helps. If you wish to discuss this with me any further, if you perhaps don't get what i mean by some of the comments...just give me a call at college.
My colour vision isnt great but what about some more refreshing zingy fruity juicy colours, unless of course the gold/pale yellow and pink will be spot varnished or foiled.
ReplyDeleteHow much have you played around with the shape of the bottles? Could you alter the form a little more to give it that extra value and tactile appreciation.
The collar label beats the main logo incorporation variation.
The right hand bottle variations would perhaps benefit from the scale of the label shrunk by as much as 40/50/60% percent for refinement and it will make the positioning much easier for you.
Whats on the back and how will it interact with the front, or not?
Take the left variation forward and perhaps play with the shape of the black box and non centred type within?
There is something not quite right about the positioning of the '7% vol.' etc. You could try extend the black box to the bottom of the bottle and place the type within it at the bottom. then you will have two rounded corner sections and not 4 if you see what I mean.
Lowercase 'gold' & 'blush'?
a combination of matt/suede finish with a glimmer of UV varnish to catch the lights on the logo and flavour type.
What about offsetting the information differently?
All in all I love what your doing with these designs and I hope this helps. If you wish to discuss this with me any further, if you perhaps don't get what i mean by some of the comments...just give me a call at college.
Nick